my haiku edits
liken to pruning banzai
a careful practice
forget it, no matter
under bus been thrown
by best of friend
but… no scars
rejected possibility
of
travel with
baggage, beneath the charter
destination met.
new, wardrobe in order
i left issues behind
to dry on line
shrivel up in sun
and crumble, to dust
particles,
blowing in wind
meeting rain
water droplets
puddle then
wash the past
away…
as they say
it’s all
water… under a structure built to span a valley, road, body of water, or other physical obstacle, for the purpose of providing passage over the obstacle.
gracious wiki
a poem named ‘dis-comfort’…
things were fuzzy…
…warm
a bit floaty,
she asked a ?
i fell ten notches…
i sorta answered.
– silence
…climbed back up 5
getting warm again,
till she interrupted…
__________
dropped down 7even
heaven out of sight
clouds raining up
a broken conversation…
porcelain cracked,
destroyed the good china
now we eat off of paper plates